Wednesday 10 March 2021

WTE Cards

 With write that essay cards we had to make a story with 3 random cards we had actions characters and a scene. I had a dog as the character swimmings as the action and waterfall as the scene.

I hear the sound of fresh running water and I run immediately in that direction. I crash through bushes and shrubs , my tummy grumbling the whole way. There it is , the plumpest duck I have ever seen in my short dog life. I lick my lips and start creeping towards it. “Splash!” I have the duck in my jaws. I break the ducks neck so it doesn’t feel pain. Wait a minute. I’m heading down a stream! Oh no! I must have not checked how deep he river wa before jumping in it! That sound! It is the of water falling hundreds of meters downwards! Then I see it, the end of the river and the start of the waterfall. My legs began kicking frantically but the current was to strong.


1 comment:

  1. Hey Kenji, this piece of writing is outstanding! It's very detailed and descriptive. I really like the intensity it makes me feel around the end of the story. Keep up the great work!

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