With write that essay cards we had to make a story with 3 random cards we had actions characters and a scene. I had a dog as the character swimmings as the action and waterfall as the scene.
I hear the sound of fresh running water and I run immediately in that direction. I crash through bushes and shrubs , my tummy grumbling the whole way. There it is , the plumpest duck I have ever seen in my short dog life. I lick my lips and start creeping towards it. “Splash!” I have the duck in my jaws. I break the ducks neck so it doesn’t feel pain. Wait a minute. I’m heading down a stream! Oh no! I must have not checked how deep he river wa before jumping in it! That sound! It is the of water falling hundreds of meters downwards! Then I see it, the end of the river and the start of the waterfall. My legs began kicking frantically but the current was to strong.
Hey Kenji, this piece of writing is outstanding! It's very detailed and descriptive. I really like the intensity it makes me feel around the end of the story. Keep up the great work!
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