Friday 23 October 2020

My Letter To Mrs Nicoll

(06) 867-5779 14/10/2020
 120 King Road, Hexton. Gmail: kk@makauri.school.nz

 Dear Mrs Nicoll, 

 This is a dreadful problem, Birds are all over the place at school we need to stop them pooping on our bags. So we need your permission to get a school cat, when we had the ginger cat we could see a difference so why not? We will fundraise to get one and make sure it is good and getting birds.

 These birds go in our bags and get them all dirty. We know that you're an awesome principal. Do you want your students to have to get new bags ? Well a cat would solve it all. 

 Yours, 

Sincerely. From Kenji Kato-Golding 

 
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 November 2020 at 13:46

    Hi Kenji it's Hollie here. I really liked how you gave reasons why we needed to get a school cat and I also like how you gave evidence that it will work. good work:)

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  2. Olive9 November 2020 at 14:02

    Hi Kenji. I really like the detail and effort you've put into this post. What were you're goals?

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